An excellent effort guys and clearly level 4 (the top band). What is particulalrly encouraging is that you have gone way beyond what was required and that shows commitment, so well done. Continuity techniques are all well executed. Lots of Match on action (I lost count!! - the one where maddie runs down corridor and then cut to other perspective as helen walks into frame - brilliant!!!), no breaking the 180 degree rule and good use of SRS. In addition you have used props and thought about setting and a really impressive execution of Low Key lighting. Great tracking shot at beginning. I am struggling to offer any constructive criticism really. Perhaps the reveal shot of Dracula behind the shelf is too short? couple of seconds longer perhaps? Perhaps a foley effect at this point as well, you would know how to do this now (you didn't at the time). Maybe the framing a little low on dracula in the library? Maybe an opportunity for a SRS at end with maddie looking at Dracula and this could have allowed you to Screate Silhouette shot of Helen. But as i say, those are small suggestions. A really excellent and outstanding piece of work guys and very very encouraging with the thriller on the horizon.
An excellent effort guys and clearly level 4 (the top band). What is particulalrly encouraging is that you have gone way beyond what was required and that shows commitment, so well done. Continuity techniques are all well executed. Lots of Match on action (I lost count!! - the one where maddie runs down corridor and then cut to other perspective as helen walks into frame - brilliant!!!), no breaking the 180 degree rule and good use of SRS. In addition you have used props and thought about setting and a really impressive execution of Low Key lighting. Great tracking shot at beginning. I am struggling to offer any constructive criticism really. Perhaps the reveal shot of Dracula behind the shelf is too short? couple of seconds longer perhaps? Perhaps a foley effect at this point as well, you would know how to do this now (you didn't at the time). Maybe the framing a little low on dracula in the library? Maybe an opportunity for a SRS at end with maddie looking at Dracula and this could have allowed you to Screate Silhouette shot of Helen. But as i say, those are small suggestions. A really excellent and outstanding piece of work guys and very very encouraging with the thriller on the horizon.
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